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写一篇关于如何控制污染和如何拯救我们的地球的短文。(英文)

找一篇关于环境污染和保护地球的英文作文,一百五十字左右。谢谢

Our actions of non-ecofriendly might seem little and can't much harm to the environment but as time passes by and all our actions are added up together and this might cause chaos in the future. In the effort of protecting the environment, we will consider the effect of our actions before making deci

保护我们的地球(英语作文)

We should save the earth The earth is the mother of mankind, the earth is our common home. We like clear water, blue sky, like watching seagulls flying; we like ice Piao, like to listen to Greenfield roar; we like to fly warbler grass long, like to listen to birds singing; we like to see the sea in

根据下面表格的提示,写一篇如何保护我们的环境(How to protect our environment/earth?)的短文,不少于


How to protect our environment?
As time goes by, man is making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and throw rubbish away here and there. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. As a result, a lot of rich land has changed into desert, leaving only sand. Many rivers and lakes are dead now. The air is becoming dirtier and dirtier. The temperature on the earth becomes higher and higher. Many people now are in bad health. I think everyone is supposed to reduce the waste. Recycling can not only protect the environment but also save money. We’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can use only once. If we are greener people, our world will become more and more beautiful.


试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以怎样保护地球或环境为题,写一篇作文。在题目中给出了我们这篇作文的要点,主要包括三部分,一是目前人们的一些不明智的做法,这里面主要有三点,乱伐树林,乱扔垃圾,排放废物;第二部分是导致的问题,包括土地沙化,河水变脏,空气质量差和全球气温升高。第三部分是你给出的建议,这一部分是自己根据自己的观点随意发挥的。写作时注意使用正确的英语句式和短语,并且注意不要遗漏要点,同时还要注意层次分明。多使用好的句式和短语,使文章表达流畅,意思连贯。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整,意思连贯,层次分明,语言表达准确,观点鲜明。将题目中所给的内容加上自己的看法,完整的表达了出来。首先作者先介绍了人们的一些错误的做法,这部分里较好的句式有As time goes by、throw rubbish away here and there等。接下来作者写的是人们这样做带来的后果,As a result, a lot of rich land has changed into desert, leaving only sand、The air is becoming dirtier and dirtier。最后,也是这篇短文的中心部分,作者给出了自己的建议,这些建议非常合理,也很切题。这里面较好的句式有I think everyone is supposed to reduce the waste、If we are greener people, our world will become more and more beautiful等。

人类只有一个地球。根据提示,以“Saving the Earth”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示: 1.如何保护环境


Saving the Earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution. We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. Some factories pour waste water into the rivers and the lakes. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.
We have only one earth. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.


试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,动笔前首先要认真审题,弄清题意。然后根据主题组织材料,确定写作内容。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文包含了所有要点,能围绕内容要点适当发挥,内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。层次清晰,语言地道,主题鲜明,内容翔实,格式正确,结构紧凑。使用了一些比较好的字句。比如:one of the biggest problems in the world;such as比如;not only……but also……;We must try our best to……等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

《我们必须保护环境》英文版

人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。 Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all
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